September 2015 archive

Term three reflection

This term has gone really fast it was also a fun term we had mr palmers gym we did a  golf clinic  with Tony we have also had Fresh Faced Friday which is where you focus on positive body image it was also a big day for the five/sixes kids.We have also done soldier research and at the end we did a presentation.We have also gone to Weeroona a couple of times for some really fun activities we have also gone to Eaglehawk for a transition day we have  had the footy game but it is only for the sixes this was a really fun class work has improved from the start os the term if i could change things i would probably work on my writing and make in a bit more interesting i would also really need to work on my stamina.I enjoyed ready once&then in maths we did fractions that was the best maths work i liked the most.

P.S. I would also change the footy game into five and six


fractured fairytales by kamryn and Jorja.

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One day in France there was a little boy named Gold.He had short brown hair and sharp green eyes.Gold’s best friend was Jackie, she had long curly hair (it was blond)she also had piercing blue eyes.One day while Jackie and Gold where walking in the park to get  to little Blues house ,they found a little sweet tiger.”The little sweet tiger looked hungry” said Jackie so of Jackie went to the butcher to get some meat.

Jackie came back with the meat ,and then she gave it to the little sweet tiger”good bye” said Gold and Jackie and of they went to Little Blues house.They continued to walk till they got to Little Blues house! When they got to Little blues house Little blue asked if Jackie and Gold could go to the party ,Gold and Jackie said yes little blues Mum told the two friend to get in the car because they where going to the party.When they got there,there was loud music and a disco ball.Then they saw there best friends beauty and the beast.

They said hello and then beauty took Jackie to get her in to her Blondella costume she loved it! it was very sparkly and very shiny and beauty got got her beautiful gown for the play ”lady’s and gentle men I give you the party play beauty yelled every one clapped as the play begun Little blue had the tome of his life.At twelve o’clock the beat got uglier then ever before so he ran far,far away never to be seen again.Beauty ran of the stage to run after the beast.Little blue tripped over and broke his arm.Jackie ripped her dress and everyone could see her undies,so she ran home Gold stayed and then he was dancing with a girl called wierdella then….

really everyone lived happily ever after

P.S. here is a photo of the characters that we made

Screen Shot 2015-09-14 at 3.01.54 pmfrom Kamryn and Jorja